The lighting in all four images is really great. The middle two images are my favorites and I think the third is the strongest. I think the simplicity of the lighting works well with the subjects. I think the centered composition of the glasses makes the last image a little boring; maybe you could have shot at a lower angle or gotten closer and used a shallower depth of field. Getting closer would also eliminated a lot of the negative space which I feel also weakens the image a bit.
Thanks for the crit, love hearing your opinions. About the sunglasses. I tried cropping it down and it didn't look right, I think I would have used a more direct light on it, it would have worked better since I could have gotten closer
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ReplyDeleteThe lighting in all four images is really great. The middle two images are my favorites and I think the third is the strongest. I think the simplicity of the lighting works well with the subjects. I think the centered composition of the glasses makes the last image a little boring; maybe you could have shot at a lower angle or gotten closer and used a shallower depth of field. Getting closer would also eliminated a lot of the negative space which I feel also weakens the image a bit.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the crit, love hearing your opinions. About the sunglasses. I tried cropping it down and it didn't look right, I think I would have used a more direct light on it, it would have worked better since I could have gotten closer
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